Wednesday 24 July 2013

Synthesis of Feedback

I was blown away by the positive comments from everyone and by the amazing job that Lanz did on the editing and game production.  That was definitely his baby. If we'd had more time, I would love to have polished up the illustrations a bit more and added a few more to the story, but thanks for the amazing compliments. The rhyming and story flow got very positive feedback and that's all thanks to Sarah.

As many pointed out, we really did intend for this to be a ready-made hook for a lesson and digital activity. Extensions could include introducing your students to the website odosketch and having them draw their own illustrations and drawings. This could then become an activity for them to do if they finish their work early or want to extend their learning through an art medium.

Overall, it seems that everyone was please with the professional results and I think that that is due a lot to Lanz's professional editing skills and Sarah's attention to detail with the voice over. Thanks Craig for your comment about it being so entertaining that kids wouldn't even realize that they were learning anything. I always like to make learning sneaky, especially for the primary grades.

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